Nice work, John!
One thing I noticed is that prior to this sentence:
"-If you are having trouble keeping food down, you might try using a food pump...."
----I don't think you mentioned feeding tubes (text refers to oral intake only at this point).
Some readers might think you can get a pump and stick a tube in the throat and pump the goodies down!
Catherine
2mm tumor excised 09/23/2008 (floor of mouth)
SCC (superficially invasive, well-differentiated)
Stage 1, T1N0M0
01/2009 and 01/2010 - PET/CT clear
Four and 1/2 years - NED!
"Detection can be easy, treatment is not!"
| 
