I have a few comments:

Introduction 2nd paragraph, first line, I would say "one of the" as opposed to "probably the most" debilitating complications. Last line You mention reduction in chemo but I had or at least I thought I had more problems with Mucositis as a result of rad than chemo.

Signs of Mucositis - no mention of lips or trismus?

Consequences of Mucositis - 4th, 5th and 6th paragraph, no mention of hydration issue?

Duration - why was just chemo mentioned and not radiation?

Preventive Steps - Why no mention of Fluoride Trays? I started mine 30 days pre Tx.

Just just quick observations.




David

Age 58 at Dx, HPV16+ SCC, Stage IV BOT+2 nodes, non smoker, casual drinker, exercise nut, Cisplatin x 3 & concurrent IMRT x 35,(70 Gy), no surgery, no Peg, Tx at Moffitt over Aug 06. Jun 07, back to riding my bike 100 miles a wk. Now doing 12 Spin classes and 60 outdoor miles per wk. Nov 13 completed Hilly Century ride for Cancer, 104 miles, 1st Place in my age group. Apr 2014 & 15, Spun for 9 straight hrs to raise $$ for YMCA's Livestrong Program. Certified Spin Instructor Jun 2014.